Information about my current Fanfiction WIP

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I've been doing alot of thinking about chapter 6, with Billie.



I'd really like to know, if anyone else wants to comment on this, if the change I'm thinking about would be well accepted or not.

When I was laying out the chapter, I had originally planned on a little more drama at the end, with a probable direct meeting between Billie and Lewis. When I got to that section, the writing took me in a totally different direction. I really don't know why, but I'm sure you other writers out there will totally agree that sometimes the story drives you, and not the other way around.

Anyway, with more detailed scenes, I had also thought of inserting the lyrics for "Another Believer" into the scene. I thought the song was very appropriate and would fit well. When the scene decided to rewrite itself, and I was rushing to finish that part of the chapter, I totally forgot about the song. Also, it didn't seem to fit anymore.

Would anoyone really object to a rewrite of the final section of chapter 6. Or have suggestions or comments on how they would like to see it go? I'd really like some input, cause this is kinda bothering me. I think it could be much better at the very end of that chapter.